Because we’re not producing a 24 minute video for our first episode, all of our feedback thus far has touched on that. The time we’re trying to make it (5-10 minutes) is a proving to be a challenge in drawing people into the story we’re trying to create. On the other side, we do chose to make this a 24 minute pilot, we don’t have a big enough budget to shoot everything or do we have the time to all that, and edit everything in time for it to get a good mark. What I think should change is that, we need to make the dialogue sharper! develop better speech patterns for each character, add more pots that hook people into the characters lives and add more subtext.